Sunday, 2 February 2014

The Full Stop - Short Story



He always ended it like that. It didn't matter how much he felt for her, he would never go so far as a simple 'o' which represented two bodies hugging or a crass emoticon. And never, never, with a spiky line based 'x' which conveyed a soft sweet kiss. It repulsed him to think such bodily functions could be typesetted. He thought it crude, basic, very unworthy of their real counterparts.

The full stop was his way. Restrained. Polite. Final. It represented more than just mere punctuation to him. It meant 'the buck stops here'. It meant that further interpretation was not his responsibility. He liked the finality. He saw safety in the slight mark left at the bottom of the line, it stabilised his universe; so he adhered to it and cradled it with fervour. He ended it with every correspondence he wrote.

The claustrophobic point of the full stop was sharp, tiny, but very real. When he put it after his name in his mail, he knew it made a statement. I am 'He'. Its effect would bind the reality of what he is into mere letters of his name, restricting the possibility of further expansion, possibilities or interaction.

She, the observer to his utterances, was given no allowance of emotion expressed through the common symbols of society. She stared at the point and felt her spirit sink at the definite nature of the spot.

Later on that day, she would wonder at all the times he had held her in his arms, when he had softly touched and kissed her and thought about where the full stop lay amongst these memories. It seemed like a sudden departure, as if his words and physical response to her were a mere contradiction, a laughable pretence, to the reality of his punctuation. She remembered when he gathered her into him and tried to dissolve her body into his, when there was no understanding of when she started and he stopped.



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